A Bad Wish

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A 30 year old guy buys a stone inside a store in Chinatown, and 
accidentally makes a wish that ...brings out his feminine side.

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An Erroneous Wish

Chinatown New York.   I always did love shopping there.   Even if 
it was cheap little stuff, or oriental trinkets of little value, it 
was still amazing to walk through.   Once, I had found a little red 
book of communism that Mao Tse Tung had given out to the people.   
It was authentic.   And for ten bucks, it was mine.   Lots of 
little things like that; a grocery store here and there that sold 
god knows what to its loyal Asian customers, or a sushi bar, I just 
loved the culture.   

Last August was especially rememberable.   For one very major 
reason.   

I was walking down some small ally near the banking district of 
Chinatown when I spotted this small hole in the wall store.   It 
was set up like all the other stores, but struck me as strange 
being this store in this inaccessible ally.   You probably couldn't 
see it from the street, you'd have to venture back here.   It 
looked like the standard tourist kind of stuff, sunglasses, a 
folded up kimono, a bunch of gold and silver watches in a tray with 
a small sign that said "$10 each," you know the kind.   And of 
course, this smiling old Chinese man standing outside waiting for 
any questions and maybe even make a sale.   

I don't know what made me go over to that store to look around.   I 
had been to a thousand stores just like it.   Maybe its because he 
probably doesn't get a lot of business out this way, and I couldn't 
stand walking passed him.   Hell, it'd probably break his heart.   
So I went up and started going though the watches.   He smiled and 
spoke in his hurried Chinese accent.   
"These ten dollar!   You will not find better some other store I 
think."
He was so enthusiastic it was almost funny.   So I tried blowing 
him off.
"Do you have anything else besides watches and stuff like that?" I 
asked.
He gave me an odd stare, still smiling away, and said simply "Come 
with me, I think you will find what you want."

I followed him into the dimly lit store, where an old woman, 
probably his wife was putting some small trinkets onto some 
shelves.   I think it might have been little statuettes of Buddha 
or frogs or something like that.   The store was small, with two 
rooms branching off from it in front of me, and to the left.   The 
room in front of me had rows of clothes hung up and in plastic 
bags.  Most were dresses, American style, nothing unusual.   My 
first thought was that perhaps she had a dry-cleaning business on 
the side.   He must have saw me looking for he spoke up.   "My wife 
is a dress-maker.   She does beautiful work.   They sell at market 
for twenty, even forty dollar."   She smiled kindly, and nodded her 
head.   I tried to venture to the next room, which I thought may 
have some swords or something else Chinese for me to buy and get on 
with my day, but he motioned for me to go into the room with the 
dresses.   
"You buy one for wife I think?" he asked.
"No, I'm not married, and I don't have a girlfriend or any 
sisters." I said flatly, trying to rule out any possible choices.   
I think I must have scolded myself for not saying "mother" too, but 
everyone has a mother, so that wouldn't work.
"For you then?" he said.   I chuckled a bit at the thought.
"No, unless she makes men's clothes I don't think I could wear any 
of those." I said, smiling politely.
He persisted.   "We don't care what you do yourself.   We sell to 
the gay man many time."
"I'm not gay either." I said, and turned away to the door to the 
other room.  He grabbed a dress off the clothing rod and 
followed.   

I looked at some of the things on the shelf.   "Same old same old" 
I thought to myself looking at the ceramics.   He came up behind me 
and took the dress out of the plastic.   He glanced at me and told 
me "hold still."   
"I don't think that will fit me." I said, thinking that would get 
me off the hook.   I'm not a cross dresser, and I didn't like the 
idea of some tourist coming in here laughing while this guy was 
sizing me up.   Besides, it looked like a child's dress.   But it 
was in an ally in the middle of nowhere so I whined a little and 
held out my arms as he motioned for me to do so.   He held it up 
against me.
"You are much, much too tall." he said.   
I was relieved.   I thought that was the end of it.   
"Oh well, I'm too tall, and I don't have anyone to buy it for."   I 
randomly picked something off of the shelf and handed it to 
him.   "I'll take this, how much?" I said, wanting to get out of 
there.   He put the dress down and took the item.   He looked at it 
smiling as usual and said  "You make good choice I think!   This 
give you good luck and wishes!" 
"Wishes huh?" I didn't act amused anymore.   By now I was plain 
sarcastic.
The item was a little stone in the shape of a pyramid.   It was 
nothing special, it didn't have any carvings, it was limestone 
grey, and rough.   I took it from him and gave him a 
twenty.   "Will that cover this little magic thing?"  He took the 
bill and nodded his head.   
"This will buy both the stone and the dress if you like." he said.
"Gee, you know what, I wish I could, but you see I don't wear 
dresses, so how about just getting my change, huh?"
His disposition had gone from smiling to concerned.   He looked 
over at his wife sternly, who in turn ran quickly to the back room 
as if she knew exactly what to do, and then he looked back at me.   

At that instant, I felt tired.   The room seemed to slow down, and 
I felt confused at this sudden feeling of calmness.   It was 
euphoric.   I felt happy, and scared at the same time.   His voice 
was low and steady, but it was distant and soft, as though I was 
farther away.   "So be it" he said, and his wife came from behind 
him with a pillow and stepped behind me.   I panicked, but it 
seemed like everything was slow motion now, and I fell backward 
into the pillow, and sank away into darkness.

I woke up in a bed in a hospital somewhere in Manhattan.   My eyes 
felt groggy and the world seemed blurred.   As the room came into 
focus, I turned over onto my side toward a window.   It was a large 
plexiglass sort of window with large vertical blinds, which were 
open a little enogh to see the World Trade Center towers.   It was 
cracked open a little bit.  

Under it was a brown paper bag that said "Kitochi Gifts - New York, 
New York" in a circle around some Chinese symbol.   I reached over 
to get it, but found it was farther away than I had thought.   I 
got up out of bed and got the paper bag.    I looked inside and 
there was the dress, folded up into a neat plastic wrap with a 
little cardboard box on top, that had printed text on top.   

Wishing stone large	3 wishes
Wishing stone med.	2 wishes
Wishing stone small	1 wish

The last one was circled in red.   
"Great" I thought. " I get the cheap one and a dress, woo hoo."
I lifted up the box, and it was very light.   I opened it up and 
there was a little white feather inside with a rice-paper note 
rolled up next to it.   I reached in to get the note.

The note was scribbled in barely legible black ink.   

"Your wish has been granted.   You may feel surprised.   To undo 
your wish, you must place the feather in your mouth for just a 
second, and the wish will end."

"What wish?" I jumped back at the sound of my voice.   It was a bit 
high like if it were to crack when you have a cold.   I cleared my 
throat.   "Why do I sound funny?" I was scared now.   My voice 
wasn't going back down.   

I felt very sick at that moment.   I ran into the bathroom on the 
other side of the room and vomited into the toilet.   I rested my 
head upon the toilet, trying to grasp what had happened.   I tried 
lifting my head back up from the toilet, and felt a tug on the back 
of my head.   I reached back to find a ponytail stuck between the 
toilet seat and the toilet.   I pulled it out and stumbled back 
against the wall.   

I looked down at the rest of my body, covered in a blue hospital 
gown.   I felt ill again.   I stood up and looked out in front of 
me.   I couldn't see myself in the mirror because it was too 
high.   

I really panicked now.   I started putting my hands though my long 
hair, wondering how and why it had happened.   I ran to the bag and 
pulled out the note again.   "Your wish has been granted?" I 
whined.   I thought back to what I had said and the terror shook me.
"...I wish I could, but I don't wear dresses..."

I knew right then what had happened.   I wanted to feel and see my 
body to make sure, but somehow I already knew.   

I was shaking now.   I stood up and looked at my hands.   They were 
small, very small, and hairless and smooth.   My arms were the 
same, and I reached with them to the back of my gown to untie it.   
It fell off to reveal everything, but my eyes were closed, afraid 
to see.   My hands moved slowly downward, and I felt first my 
stomach, my belly-button, and then to my horror, a void where my 
penis used to be.   I began to cry.   
My hands went further and felt the smooth, hairless surface of my 
new organ.   I finally opened my eyes and looked down.   My sobs 
became greater now, and I fell back into the wall with my hands 
searching for what was lost.

I fell asleep crying.


When I awoke, it was the next day.   I had been crying for some 
time, my eyes and throat were sore, and that alone told me it 
wasn't a dream.   The shades where drawn on the window.
  
I lay there groping myself, still amazed and saddened at what 
happened.   A nurse walked inside my room with a cart full of food, 
and some syringes of something.   I looked up at her with big wet 
eyes.

She was very attractive.   Full breasted with a short skirt and 
sheer hosiery; chestnut hair and a pleasant smile.   I was 
surprised at my empty feeling of what would usually accompany an 
erection.   I felt like I had been made not a girl but a gay man, 
for at that very moment, I was uninterested in what used to be a 
life obsession.    
"Sit up, young lady" she instructed kindly, and I obeyed, although 
I was apprehensive at the "young lady" part.   She put the food on 
my lap, and I flinched.   The void was still there, and I wasn't 
used to it at all.   
"What's the matter?" she asked.   "Oh don't be afraid, its just 
food, now eat something."
I picked up the plastic fork next to the plate and began to eat.   
I must have drank more than three glasses of water, my throat 
couldn't seem to get enough.   She picked up my arm and poked me 
with one of the syringes.   "What's that?" I asked.
"This is to make you a little better, honey.   You have been 
through a lot."
I left it at that, for I didn't want to hear my own voice anymore, 
it was too much for me.

The nurse left and I remained sitting up, finishing off the food 
she had given me.   I glanced in the bathroom and saw a stool in 
front of the sink and mirror.   They must have placed them there 
after I had passed out.   I got out of bed and walked over to the 
stool.   I stepped up and glanced into the mirror.   It didn't seem 
like me.   It wasn't me at all, although it moved like me.   It was 
a little girl, about 10 or 11 starring back through that glass.   
Long hair, no longer tied up in a tail, but let down to a little 
more that shoulder length.   I became frightened again, and then 
calmed.   It seemed like the more I thought about this the more I 
wondered about it, and yet the more I accepted it.   

I reached down into my hospital pajama pants they had fit me into 
while sleeping.   The empty spot was still there, with a sensitive 
new spot behind it.   I didn't go further, I was afraid to.   I 
went back into bed and got underneath the covers, head and all.   I 
took off all my clothes and stared at what I saw.   My legs were 
smooth and hairless.   My thighs seemed thicker and my knees were 
less obvious.   My feet were so tiny, I was surprised I didn't fall 
before when I tried to walk.   My chest had two small pieces of fat 
I guess where supposed to be breasts, but again, I didn't look like 
a woman, I looked like a young girl. 

That hit me all at once.   Why don't I have pubic hair? How am I 
going to pee? Do I like guys now?   Why am I so young?  How the 
fuck did this happen???

I started sobbing again, and I heard a door shut in the room.   I 
poked my head out of the covers, and he was already at the foot of 
the bed, reading the chart.   

I looked back at my body, and fell back onto the pillow.   
"It's alright, little girl.   You'll be on your way shortly."


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